Lessons from the Landscape
Telling It Like It Is....
...Instead of showing. I'll have to fix that.
First draft:
He leaned forward and laid a soft kiss on her forehead. "I'll be fine. Goodnight."
Umm, let's try that again.
He leaned closer. Dry lips brushed her brow. "I'm fine. Goodnight."
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